Goooooood
I need to watch more of your stuff. I seriously have a bad view on your work because of one or two things I saw which is completely unfair. This was pretty funny, even though I'm not entirely sure what the hell Orgasm girl is... I know it's something on here, but I've never seen it, so there ya go. But you explained it well, so I wasn't left out. Yay.
So I'm going to watch more so I can stop being unfairly biased against ya. ITS JUST WHAT NICE PEOPLE DO FOR EACH OTHER, DAMNIT.
Thanks Bobert, HOPE YOU LIKE MY STUFF HOPEFULLY!
You tell em'!
I watched it, I laughed. Ending was good.
Reminds me of posters a CERTAIN SOMEONE HAS ON THEIR WALLS STILL. YAKNOWWHATIMEAN.
thank you father i fail you not
Pretty good for C&H
I have to say, you've never really impressed me with this series before. It was all short little skits with a single punchline, and half the time it was painfully predictable.
I'm glad to see with this release, it's got more to get into. Plus, the animation is pretty good as well, so good job with that.
The voices in the beginning could've used a bit of work, but that doesn't detract from it much since most of this is just music.
This was somewhat predictable too, but a little less predictable than the others, so you're getting better with it. Good job, all in all.
This deserves a higher score
Seriously, that was hilarious. Sure, it was just two nonmoving characters and only one joke, but COME ON. The execution was flawless. I love the fuck out of this short right now. Hell yes man. Yes.
Besides, for two nonmoving characters, they look good, so WHY THE HELL NOT. YES.
I actually really liked this
Which is weird, because usually I don't think too much of your work. A random song, a gay joke here and there, more random humor... usually no structure. But this has an interesting funny-but-depressing vibe to it. A friend told me about the twist, but hearing about it and seeing it are two different things. I ended up really liking it in the end, so I'm glad I actually watched it. I wish you the best of luck with everything.
Is that really how you see my stuff generally? That's a shame, I like your stuff.
Point me out to the gay jokes if possible, and I thought lately my stuff have been fairly structured. BUT OKAY, I'll make a note of it.
Glad you liked this one.
Yep, that's Newgrounds for you
First, good animation. Nothing ground breaking, but you know how to do it, so that's good. I have to agree with the others in saying the ending wasn't all great... I mean, it's ironic, sure, but this has been done to death on NG. So many flash will have that sort of lame attempt at a final joke... haha death, it's shocking so it's funny. Of course, this isn't a humorous flash, but you get what I mean. If it wasn't for the ending, it would've been cute and had a more of a point to it.
But that's just the story, and the story is only one element of it, so okay. Otherwise it was a decent animation, it had a cute style, and the music was good too. Work on the writing and you'll have a good animation on your hands. Keep trying, man!
This is exactly what Hitchcock had to go through when he killed off the young boy and old lady on the bus.
I really don't like happy happy films, so an abrupt albeit slightly disturbing moral is the way to go for me.
Though I do agree, my scriptwriting needs work.
That's because usually I make everything up on the spot, but this is my first time actually trying.
Cheers for the critique.
Pretty good
The animation was pretty good, but what really makes this shine (like a few others have mentioned) is the music. Wish it was on the audio portal so I could listen to it more. But hey, at least it's in this flash, so yay for that. And yay for this entire thing! Good job. I can't think of any critiques, especially since this seems to be more of a test than anything else, so it works for its purpose. I assume. I'm rambling, so I'll stop.
Jesus christ that was long
First of all, I'm sorry you had to see it. I know I'm sorry I had to see it, bleh... seriously, no one should ever have to sit through that garbage. Good job on pointing all that out though, some of those points were ones even I hadn't thought of, heh. Fuckin' teeny bopper shit.
I gave you an 7 because while it was good, it was just a bunch of screenshots from the movie. The writing was good, though, so that's definitely worth a 7. Would've been a 10 had it involved real animation. Good job all the same.
Wow
You actually got a 'that's terrible' out of me when I saw the ending... jeez. Nicely done, though. Completely messed up story, even moreso than the original. Great stuff. Really can't think of anything to critique here... not that you'd need it, but hey. Whatever, I enjoyed it, end of story. Keep it up, blah blah blah. You know the drill.
Hmm
Not bad, but it's missing the typical Madness flair. It's usually faster paced and more mind boggling, you know. The chaos that Madness is usually about is abnormally absent here. I really hope you turn the violence and speed up some in the next part, because otherwise I can't see the ending being as awesome as it should be. Also, some of the bits were... kind of cliché. The car chase scene, how Hank recovers, even how he looks when he emerges. Hm.
It was still good and interesting, though. It's funny how near the end all the characters just keep getting bigger, heh. I wonder if that's how the next fight will be, they'll just keep getting bigger and bigger, knocking each other around.
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