Score: 9

"Thanks Tim Fulp"

submission: Jerry: The End

date: November 2, 2009

Not a bad way to end the series. I do have a couple of gripes with this one, though, but it all has more to do with the story than anything else. This included a lot more drama than humor, in my opinion. I guess it was bound to happen, but I was hoping it was going to keep its sick, yet realistic humor intact. This one seemed to just be your way of displaying your annoyance with Jerry and justifying what you did to him so fans would stop begging to bring him back to life. Well, they all do that, but this one moreso than the others.

Then it ended with him holding hands with child Jackie and it's like... really? Predictable as hell. Not a good way to end it off, really. There were a few other areas you could've fleshed out in the story and it could've just been a montage of random snippets from different times of his life that weren't covered before... and with a filesize of 18 MB, that's kind of what I was hoping for.
And the revelation the dad makes was the same as the one made in the one about Jerry's kid. It was kind of unnecessary to bring it up twice, I think. But look at me, being anal about such simple things.

It was good otherwise, the animation is still good and the shading in key moments was a nice touch. The quality of some of the voices, especially Jerry's when he finally does speak was kind of crappy, but forgivable. I just wish the story had more substance to it beyond the drama, though. At its heart, it was meant as a disturbing comedy and this one has much more drama than comedy to it. But hey, you tried!

Score: 10

"Hah"

submission: Nameless 6 Vol.3 Part 2/2

date: October 18, 2009

I sat here and watched this entire thing. It was really, really good, man. Good job with it. Although the part in the credits, where you mention Rob... I know it ain't me, but it's still a creepy coincidence.
And I'm glad the manatee is okay.

Score: 9

"Goooooood"

submission: Rwd: 032 Orgasm Girl

date: October 18, 2009

I need to watch more of your stuff. I seriously have a bad view on your work because of one or two things I saw which is completely unfair. This was pretty funny, even though I'm not entirely sure what the hell Orgasm girl is... I know it's something on here, but I've never seen it, so there ya go. But you explained it well, so I wasn't left out. Yay.
So I'm going to watch more so I can stop being unfairly biased against ya. ITS JUST WHAT NICE PEOPLE DO FOR EACH OTHER, DAMNIT.

Score: 9

"You tell em'!"

submission: Kids These Days

date: October 18, 2009

I watched it, I laughed. Ending was good.

Reminds me of posters a CERTAIN SOMEONE HAS ON THEIR WALLS STILL. YAKNOWWHATIMEAN.

Score: 8

"Pretty good for C&H"

submission: Waiting for the Bus!

date: September 9, 2009

I have to say, you've never really impressed me with this series before. It was all short little skits with a single punchline, and half the time it was painfully predictable.
I'm glad to see with this release, it's got more to get into. Plus, the animation is pretty good as well, so good job with that.
The voices in the beginning could've used a bit of work, but that doesn't detract from it much since most of this is just music.
This was somewhat predictable too, but a little less predictable than the others, so you're getting better with it. Good job, all in all.

Score: 9

"Yay, made it to 25,000"

submission: Murray's Missile Mayhem

date: September 2, 2009

This game is hilariously simple, and yet, great. Why great? Because Bill Murray's involved. That's all you need, slap his face on there and references to his most successful movies and BAM. Wish there were more bosses, though. I do find it funny how you basically play until you die. Just now I finally got through all the bosses (twice in fact) before finally dying. Good fun.

Score: 8

"Woah"

submission: !!! 2 LEGIT 2 QUIT !!!

date: August 22, 2009

That walk cycle was amazing.

Just saying.

Score: 10

"This deserves a higher score"

submission: Batman: Bright Day

date: June 29, 2009

Seriously, that was hilarious. Sure, it was just two nonmoving characters and only one joke, but COME ON. The execution was flawless. I love the fuck out of this short right now. Hell yes man. Yes.
Besides, for two nonmoving characters, they look good, so WHY THE HELL NOT. YES.

Score: 10

"I actually really liked this"

submission: Birthday 18

date: June 15, 2009

Which is weird, because usually I don't think too much of your work. A random song, a gay joke here and there, more random humor... usually no structure. But this has an interesting funny-but-depressing vibe to it. A friend told me about the twist, but hearing about it and seeing it are two different things. I ended up really liking it in the end, so I'm glad I actually watched it. I wish you the best of luck with everything.

Score: 7

"Yep, that's Newgrounds for you"

submission: Wanted To Be A Ghost

date: May 17, 2009

First, good animation. Nothing ground breaking, but you know how to do it, so that's good. I have to agree with the others in saying the ending wasn't all great... I mean, it's ironic, sure, but this has been done to death on NG. So many flash will have that sort of lame attempt at a final joke... haha death, it's shocking so it's funny. Of course, this isn't a humorous flash, but you get what I mean. If it wasn't for the ending, it would've been cute and had a more of a point to it.

But that's just the story, and the story is only one element of it, so okay. Otherwise it was a decent animation, it had a cute style, and the music was good too. Work on the writing and you'll have a good animation on your hands. Keep trying, man!